话题写作七: 情感表达篇
话题分析:
日常生活中同学们经常遇到情感问题。 对父母,老师的感恩,对同学,母校的感谢, 生活中, 学习中遇到的快乐的,烦恼的事,对待身边人与事物的正确态度等都属于情感表达篇。 这类试题要求考生结合自己的经历或者感受进行写作, 通常利用汉语引出话题的方式来进行考查。
常用词汇表达:
Think of , have a discussion, such as, one of the main reasons, agree with sb. Become interested in, give up doing, continue to do, would rather do, the more… the more, rather than, be strict with, hard working, thanks for,
常用句型:
1. 我们的生活中可能有不愉快的事情。 There may be something unpleasant in our life.
2. 对我们自己微笑能寻回我们的信心打败不愉快的情绪。
Smiling to ourselves can bring back our confidence and beat the unhappy feelings. 3. 我们应该学会对其他人微笑, 它会帮助我们去接近其他人。 We should learn to smile to others, and it will help us to get closer to others. 4. 我相信我们的世界将会更精彩并且我们的生活将越来越幸福。
I believe our world will be more wonderful and our life will be happier and hpaaier. 5. 在我的生活中我从很多人那得到很多帮助和爱
I get much help and love from many people in my life. 6. 当我学习有问题时,我的老师是这么有耐心和有帮助的。
When I have problems with my study, my teachers are so patient and helpful. 7. 我最爱的人是我妈妈。The person I love most is my mother. 8. 当我长大的时候,我会做我能做的来使我妈妈高兴。 When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. 9. 我同学告诉我哭泣不是解决问题的好办法。
My classmate told me that crying wasn’t a good way to solve the problem. 10. 我同学所做的一切让我如此感到以至于忍不住喜极而泣。 What my classmates did is so moved that I couldn’t crying for joy.
常用谚语:
1. After storm comes a calm. 雨过天晴。 2. Honesty is the best policy. 诚实至上。
典例精析:
微笑是一种态度。请你以” Learn to Smile”为题。为你校《英语园地》写一篇稿件。 内容包括: 1. 学会对自己微笑。2、 学会对他人微笑。3. 微笑是一种语言。 注意: 1. 紧扣主题,表述全面,准确,流畅。2. 词数:80—100. 参考词汇: 态度attitude, 自信心confidence
审题思路: 1. 主题: 2. 要点 :
3. 时态: 4. 人称: 列提纲: 誊写:
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实战演练:
在日常生活和学习中, 你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱, 此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。 请根据下面所给的提示用英语写一篇短文。 提示: 1. 感谢的人, 亲人,老师,同学…… 2. 感谢他们的原因,生活方面,学习方面…… 3. 对他们的美好祝福
要求: 1. 内容要包括所给提示 2. 语句通顺,意义连贯,语法正确,书写规范 4. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
In my life, I get lots of help and love from many people. Now I want to express my thanks to them.
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