经典套用屡试不爽
英语作文中令阅卷老师嚼味未尽的15道菜————
1.Now we are entering a new era ,full of opportunities as well as challenges.
现在我们正在进入一个机遇与挑战并存的时代。(屡试不爽,这个很棒句子我估计用了200次,我通常用在文章的第一句,用来说明时代背景,很能吸引老师眼球的,不信下次试试看)
2.There is a seed in everyone’s heart.As long as we keep an eye on it ,it will grow and harvest. 我们每个人的内心都有这样的一颗种子,只要我们留心关注它,它就会成长与收获。
(这个句子的这个词组keep an eye on用得很棒,通常情况下,这个句子可以用于很多很多话题的,背下它吧,随便用,很有韵味,很可爱,我很喜欢,我想老师也不例外)
3.Life is much like a mirror:if you smile on it ,it smiles back on you;if you frown,you will get a similar look in return.
生活像一面镜子:你对它笑它对你笑;你对它哭,它也对你哭!(其实呢,这是异译过来的,frown 是皱眉的意思,想一下这样有深度优美整齐的句子,那个家伙不喜欢呢?有种可能,他的脑袋进水了)
4.Remember what should be remembered,and forget what should be forgotten.
Alter what is changeable ,and accept what is immutable.
记住该记住的,忘记该忘记的;改变可改变的,接受无法改变的。
(这个句子,想办法用在作文中,震撼力强就强在它太有道理啦,老师会拍案叫绝的)
5.Years make the skin old,but to give up enthusiasm makes the soul old.
岁月使我们的皮肤变老,但是没有激情使我们的灵魂变老。
6.Nothing great can be accomplished without goals / enthusiasm (passion )/ principles /self-discipline自律/honesty诚信/perseverance(persistence )恒心/willpower毅力„„
(哎呀,表面看这个句子长得很丑,但我们不能以貌取人,其实它有许许多多的内在“美”,看看吧,其实是without 后面的名词在作怪,当话题是goal ,就这样翻译:没有目标,我们将一事无成;当话题是enthusiasm 时,译成:没有激情,我们将一事无成;当话题是principle 时,译:无矩不成方圆„„总之,它神通广大,无所不能。特别注意without 后面加的名词,假如它是可数的话记得给它s )
7.Every man is the architect of his own fortune.每个人都是他命运的建筑师。
(这句话也挺时髦的,尤其是对于我们,赞一个!好好设计我们的命运吧,原来我们的命运是我们自己设计的。告诉你,你可以把句子拉长,吓唬一下老师,就在前面加上There is a famous saying goes that„„有一句名言说的很好:„)
8. It goes without saying that “A journey of thousands miles begins with a single step.” 毫无疑问,千里之行始于足下。
9.If winter comes,can spring be far behind.------Shelley
如果冬天来了,春天还会远吗?——雪莱(写到关于什么克服困难,乐观态度呀,这句话用上的话,得高分不困难的,乐观得让人泪流满面)
10. Opportunity knocks at every door.Be sure that when it knocks at your door ,you are ready.
机会会敲响每一扇门,确保当它来敲你的门时,你一切准备就绪了。(哇„第一次见到这个句子,当时让我拍案叫绝,好妙呀,英语也有拟人的手法,换换口味,绝对给人耳目一新的feel ,有机会就用上它)
11.There is no royal road to learning/succeeding./stuggling/growing„„.
学习/成功/奋斗/成长„„没有捷径。(英语作文中难免会说到:„„是没有捷径的,用上它准没错!顺便用,我不收专利费, 记得to 是介词哦)
12.Passion is like a pair of swings full of magic and power,bringing us away from the sorrow of sea.
激情像一对富有魔力的翅膀,把我们带出忧郁的海洋。(把passion 换成hope ,goal ,belief ,confidence „„同样屡试不爽,给人的感觉就是extraordinary 非同寻常的)
13. Confidence is a kind of power and courage which enables us to survive and work.
Without it ,our fortune is like being sentenced to death by ourselves.
自信心是一种让我们生存与工作下去的勇气与力量,没有它,就相当于自己给自己判了死刑!(confidence 可以替换成faith/enthusiasm„„)
14.The overwhelming darkness can never overcome the radiant light of morning.If you are in the season of sorrow, hang in there, because the season of happiness may be just around the corner 压倒性的黑暗永远无法战胜晨曦,如果你现在正处在忧郁的季节,坚持住,因为,也许快乐的季节就在不远处了。
(像这种“美”味十足又地地道道的句子,这道菜留给别人的是缕缕余香,嚼味十足的回忆)
15.There is not a journey in the world as long as our feet and there is not an existing mountian higher than man.
没有比脚更长的路,没有比人跟高的山!(如此扣人心弦的句子,假如我是阅卷老师,又是第一次看到的话,很新鲜,那么,告诉你,你惨了,出意外啦:不拿高分也难啦!) As a contemporary college student,wo should lead the way!
作为当代的大学生,我们应该首当其冲!
整理人make a difference----lee 囧杰